Sam's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku Powers up?]

Could of been quite a nice short

Spend more time cleaning up your animations, your drawings aren't too bad but you'll get better with practice. I noticed his shirt changed colour half way through, and his jaw had stray brushed all over the place.

Ideally the last scene where he's on the toilet, should of been the best drawing because there wasn't much to animation.

Learn basic actionscript such as: stop();
to learn how to create play buttons and preloaders.

LordAbdo responds:

I'm trying, but I just sarted animatiing on flash a few days ago and slightly am getting the hang enough, thanks.

[naruto fan flash three]

Needs a lot of improvement

You can obviously draw, but you're animations are lacking. That was something like 3 or 4 minutes long and it felt like it wasn't finished at all.

I would rather see 30 seconds of great animation than 3 minutes of half finished, half arsed animation. With a bit of practice you could easily do that, instead of submitting things like this and getting scores of 2.5's spend longer understand animation and learning new techniques, then submit something better to get something more like 3.5.

Also; Backgrounds.

trunksfan001 responds:

sorry, im doing this all first hand, noone has ever taught me this stuff

[Everyday Zombie]

Great short

That was amazing man. Smooth animation, lip syncing was good and I was lolling where he goes "And your brains have been looking pretty tasty". Great potential for some sort of series.

Only thing that bothered me was the fact the guy didn't really scream when he got attacked, just being picky.

The song you made of it at the end is pure win.

Willeeto responds:

Thanks dude!
Yeah i get what you mean, we didn't really storyboard it or plan it very well, just recorded all the lines in one recording and got to it.
Appreciate the score man (:

[Zanta Claws]

Alot more

This delivered alot more then I expected, I found myself laughing alot more towards the end aswell. The story line was good and simple - and the ending was perfection . Animation wasnt amazing, but it was very good. Just wondering, how long did you spend on this?

eddsworld responds:

i have been working on and off since about half way through november

[Flathead Symphony]

Sooooo coool!

So cool! How long did this take you?! Flatheads! lol xD Made me laugh, the DJ ones the best. I love the music to this. Lovely work, deserves a 10. So i gave it one!

Dustball responds:

Thanks! Dan created all of the individual animations is a few hours and then I spent about 4 days creating the music and then syncronizing everything, then doing the arrangments/camrea work.

[Samurai Sword 3]

cool =P

Very cool! That samari deserved that wedgie! Lol, very funny. Loved the music at the end also!

Dark-ChiCKeN responds:

Tks for the rewiew man,the samurai is going to came back on episode 5,and the song was from el hazard..cool ah :)